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Well, if it isn't my old friend Inbetweening.

How are you?

BesidesHASGRARSHKLAGLASHSHASHRAAAAAAA


Yes. So. While not as action-y as last time, I found this to be smoother animation and line wiseINBETWEENINGHUURRRGH

So, aside from taking the brush off pressure and more patience with the shadows for less jitter, I'd like to know what else could be done as this(and maybe 1 or 2 more) will be the precursor to what I hope to be the crown jewel of the next demo reel.

CRITIQUES ALL OVER THE PLACE FOREVER:iconbisonplz:

...hey, where did the 'Encourage advanced critique' drop down menu go?

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:iconmechadaveo:
Here's a better audio of this clip for when you "do it again".
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:iconhessiand:
ಠ_ಠ ...

This is the exact same thing with 2 extra seconds of trumpet.
:iconkarinkanzuki:
hahahhhaha YESSSSS!

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:icon47ness:
But... we already KNOW you want Advanced Critique. All the time. ^^; (and even then it didn't seem like a lot of people got your drift when the option was available) :\

This is a tough one to critique, as it just sorta starts and then ends, yanno? I think the ONE little detail that isn't working for me is when his eyes go from •_• to ·_· and his whole body is heaving up, his mouth remains in that same clenched-teeth position. It feels mismatched with the rest of his expression. He might be better off going •: or D: and then come back down the to clenched-teeth and then quickly transition into the shit(glass?)-eating grin.

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:iconhessiand:
AND I WILL CONTINUE TO WHINE ABOUT IT UNTIL YOU LIKE IT @A@

It is a short loop, but it was more the process than the length I was going with at this point.

And the mouth thing would be more dynamic, but it might goose up the lip sync a smidge. Still :yum:
:icon47ness:
Ahah... I honestly didn't connect the man's lip movement with the vocal track, afraid to say. '-';;;

(part of it might have been the bad audio, but also his mouth never open-opens to form the "YE-"...)

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